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Jan 25Liked by Kirsi Dahl

Wonderful. We are transported into her life. Excellent !

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Thank you, Paul! It's been a year-long journey to get to this point (as you know!)

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This is fabulous, you had me hooked from the fumble with the ring. Well done!

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Thank you, Barbara! I'm so excited to have finally got this story to the point I have it! I can't wait to hear what you think once it's done.

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If you haven't already found it, don't miss this serialized story about Vivian Mae with Part 5 coming out shortly. The series is a wonderful example of capturing a generation and bringing it to life in little read-ready chunks, a little like a radio drama you listen to when taking on a regular task. I recommend subscribing so you can keep up with the stories and watch Kirsi's continuous experimentation. Such a joy to find this kind of creativity here. Thank you!

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Feb 2Liked by Kirsi Dahl

This story not only says so much about Vivian, but also about that era. I love it!

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Jan 26Liked by Kirsi Dahl

Can’t wait for more !

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Jan 26·edited Jan 26Liked by Kirsi Dahl

A lovely example of using facts and imagination to tell the story of your ancestor. Thank you! Looking forward to part 2.

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Jan 25Liked by Kirsi Dahl

Hooked! Can’t wait to learn more about Vivian!

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Thank you! I've been excited to share her story ever since I shared the story of my grandfather. There are always two sides to story!

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